Very creative design yet it is a bit cluttered. I think simplifying the design of the jersey would help a bit. It is hard to tell what is a link and what isn't
It's very creative. I think you need to make the actual content on the page bigger. Right now, it looks like most of the content will be below the fold. The jersey idea is good, so hopefully you'll be able to keep that and still make the site work.
I like the idea, but the shirt takes too much space.
The logos look good, but I did not notice the bottom right away.
Keep in mind some non-BSU people may come onto your site and may not know that is what your uniform looks like. Something to keep in mind because anyone can see your site.
Dailey's idea of using an actual photograph is pretty cool. It could go in another direction; just take some graphic elements from a jersey, like the contrasting red lines, and then overlay them over a solid colored background. That way you're using some visual ideas but with a more traditional set up. You could make the background a thread like texture.
I agree that the use of pictures could give a very real look to the site. And once you get the picture in there it might work to have the logos in the grass instead of on the main object and save the main object for the main content of the page.
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Home page is slightly cluttered but I really like the idea. Looks like it could potentially be a really great site.
Down size a little bit. Make the background smaller. I like the idea but just define the style a little more.
I like the jersey background layout. I thought it was the first original design we saw all morning. Move the logos to the bottom so it isn't as busy.
Very creative design yet it is a bit cluttered. I think simplifying the design of the jersey would help a bit. It is hard to tell what is a link and what isn't
It's very creative. I think you need to make the actual content on the page bigger. Right now, it looks like most of the content will be below the fold. The jersey idea is good, so hopefully you'll be able to keep that and still make the site work.
Yeah, it's kind of cluttered, almost like a "I want everything at once everywhere all the time" Myspace kind of thing.
I like the idea, but the shirt takes too much space.
The logos look good, but I did not notice the bottom right away.
Keep in mind some non-BSU people may come onto your site and may not know that is what your uniform looks like. Something to keep in mind because anyone can see your site.
Dailey's idea of using an actual photograph is pretty cool. It could go in another direction; just take some graphic elements from a jersey, like the contrasting red lines, and then overlay them over a solid colored background. That way you're using some visual ideas but with a more traditional set up. You could make the background a thread like texture.
I agree that the use of pictures could give a very real look to the site. And once you get the picture in there it might work to have the logos in the grass instead of on the main object and save the main object for the main content of the page.
I would try to get an actual photo of the jersey laid out the same way you have it drawn.
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